I suppose I miss spoke, or miss wrote, out of my laziness. I did not take the time to copy the lines from your story that needed editing. It was actually probably some typos. Now I am having a hard time navigating back to the published piece. So you can just add me ot the group of white men you do not want correcting you. I was a teacher for 30 years before I retired and it is just kind of burned into my brain to point out errors to try to help people improve.